Until I Inhale

by Julie on January 9, 2012 · 6 comments

One breath at a time


Until I Inhale

The tip of my finger quivers

As it moves along the ridge of your heart.

This line between you and me

is utterly fine.

You are just a breath away,

Until I inhale.


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wholly jeanne January 9, 2012 at 8:50 pm

Jewels, as your writing partner, I have just added a writing project to your list: a book of poetry. And this one goes in the section titled Saucy. Or maybe Heartstopping.


Maeve January 10, 2012 at 7:16 am

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.


Sherold January 10, 2012 at 8:14 am

Beautiful post Julie. I stopped and was in the present as a I read it and I’m reminded to stay there.


Katharine January 10, 2012 at 10:25 am

You evoke Rumi for me, Julie.
Such beauty in so few sweet words. Such a gift.
Thank you, always.


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